Writing 2 Model Essay
Brainstorm Why I like my neighborhood.
It is quiet, My neighbors are nice, I feel safe, peaceful moments,
Police drive by, My kids like it, What things affect my
Title My Neighborhood is Great
Introduction I really love my neighborhood. It is a quiet, safe place with great
neighbors. In short, my neighborhood is nice to live in.
1st Body My neighborhood is quiet. Even though it has the regular amount
Paragraph of noise of any place, there are many peaceful moments.
For example, after most people have gone to work, you can hardly
hear any noise. Of course, when the kids get home, there is more
noise; but, it is relatively quiet all day in my neighborhood.
2nd Body Also, I feel safe in my neighborhood. The police drive around it
Paragraph everyday and the kids play outside with no problems. Since there
is not much traffic, we donít worry too much about cars.
Furthermore, I can walk around my neighborhood without being
afraid of someone hurting me. All in all, my neighborhood is
3rd Body My neighbors are really good people. They watch out for each
Paragraph other and this makes where I live extra nice. If anyone has a
problem with their car or even something in their house, a
neighbor is usually there to help. One day, I couldn't start my car, and
my neighbor asked what was wrong. I explained that my car wouldnít start,
and he got my car going again. This is just one of the many examples of how my neighbors are
the best people I know.
Conclusion In conclusion, my neighborhood is a great place to live.
There isnít a lot of noise, it is secure, and most of all, the neighbors
are helpful. There is no place like home and that is my