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1. Style too low—inappropriate use of contractions in academic writing.
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2. Style too low—slang, online lingo, vulgarities, street language.
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3. Inappropriate use of 2nd person ("you") in academic writing.
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4. Calling
people “that” in academic writing.
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5. English fluency / ESOL problems—have
text checked over!
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6. Verb tense formation problems—get a verb book!
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7. Problems
with formation and use of plurals, missing "s" for plurals.
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8. Switching person (1st, 2nd, 3rd)
unnecessarily in a paragraph.
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9. Lack of or weak thesis statement or
standpoint.
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10. Excess use of passive verbs and constructions.
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11. Concluding
with “In conclusion,” or similar.
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12. Failure to clearly establish your “right to
write” on subject.
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13. Lack of your own voice in writing, parroting others.
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14. Works Cited problems, failure to cite sources in text, plagiarism.
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15. Lack of coherence, babbling, unclear or nonsense writing, changes of
standpoint. .
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16. Trying for too high a style, using “fancy” thesaurus words
inappropriately.
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17. Writing fails the “Who cares?” test,
boring, lacks visible purpose or interest.
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18. No audience is
evident, or fails to serve intended
audience, tries for "universal audience.".
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19. Text includes fallacies or relies on unreliable sources or arguments.
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20. Verbal
“fat,” excess wordiness, contains unnecessary repetition.